Sunday, September 28, 2008

What is my aim?

I know my name
But do not know what in life I aim?
Is it fame?
What role do I play in life’s game?

Shall I make money and stack it in a heap?
I do not know which mountain to leap
My mind is so unclear
Hope a solution is near

Am I here to lead?
Or just part of the creed
So many worries to heed
Divine help is what I need

Fear of failure does crop
Someday success will take me to the top
The sea of uncertainty I will tide
I am not the one to hide


Gayatri Samant said...

You are a star Vijit

You are clear with your thoughts and it is a wonderfully written poem

Looking forward to more from you

Harsh said...

Your aim is near
Don’t give in
Just follow your heart
You are born to win

:-) nice poem

Sangitha said...

Short and sweet....
"The sea of uncertainty I will tide
I am not the one to hide.."
Loved these lines... :)
Keep writing!!!

Vijit said...

Thank you Sangitha, Harshada and Gayatri for your valuable comments.

I hope I can improve my writing skills.......... :-)

Ujjwal Trivedi said...


Vijit said...

Thanks Ujjwal!!!